(Author’s note: Had to take last week off again, due to some unfortunate pain related to my exercise regimen. I’m better now. And while I’m on new business, there’s a new watcher to the board. His name is H.K., and he’s a great guy with a sense of humor. He’s someone who is interested in what Music and Fiction is all about. H.K., welcome aboard! Here’s today’s fictioneers…)
© Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Brick House
by Miles H. Rost
His foot hooked on a root, and he fell flat on his face into a peat bog.
Michael ignored the pain and kept running.
He had to get away.
His girlfriend Nadine had gone nuts.
For the first 3 months, their relationship was hands off and very slow-going. Without warning, she jumped on him and tried to perform a tonsillectomy with her tongue.
Seeing the old brick garage, he ran in and barred the door. He could hide out there.
*click*
Light came on behind him. He turned around.
“Oh, Michael…”
It was the end. He couldn’t run from her lust.
Music and Fiction 
What was his problem with tonsillectomy with tongue? Others may enjoy it.
He’s a slow mover. She….well…isn’t.
I don’t think this relationship is going to work. The Scales of Lust are severely imbalanced.
Better believe it!
Tonsilectomy with her tongue–hilarious! And not sexy if you aren’t feeling the moment 🙂
Strong imagery is necessary to get the point across, sometimes. And yes, if you’re not feeling it, it gets downright freaky.
Don’t think this will work out!
Yeah….I don’t think will either.