(Author’s Note: Things can change in a week. Currently, I am waiting for my visa number to be issued. Upon that, I apply for a visa and head back to teach students in Korea yet again. I will likely be gone by the end of December and starting to teach at the beginning of January. So, I will be back to writing lots of newer stories, along with writing other things that won’t be published here. Today, we have another fictioneers event that seems like it’ll be quite fun.)

© Luther Siler
Sour Girl
by Miles H. Rost
The crunch awoke Paul from a dead slumber. Grumbling, he walked down stairs. He nearly reached the bottom when he froze.
“Dad!”
Paul looked into his 16 year old daughter’s face, surprised that she found his old college mascot costume.
“Charity! How did you get that?”
“I found it. Now tell me about this!”
“Well, I went to a local college here. You know it as the big university now. Our mascot was a yellow chicken. I did this to help pay for my tuition.”
Charity flipped her hand, knowing there was more.
“It was also the costume I wore when I first met your mom.”
“And there we have it.”
“She didn’t like it. She was a sour girl the day that she met me…”
“And how many years now?”
“19 wonderful years…”
(R.I.P. Scott Weiland)
LOL. Sour girl turned sweet. Nice one.
I know a few of them…XD
Fun. And there we have it.
Good use of the prompt as a memorial dedication.
It just seemed…appropriate. 😀
I agree, good use of the prompt as a tribute.
The chicken obviously plied his charm turning sour into 19 wonderful years. Lovely.
Nice take on the prompt. It began as many college romances the girl thinks the guy is a creeper. Who can blame her? Have a great time in Korea my son is currently there teaching as well.
Which city? I’m going to be in the “center” of the country at Cheongju.
He is on the coast in Yeongdeok and Jansa Beach
Doesn’t matter how they met… as long as there was a connection!
A sweet story, for a whimsical prompt.
What a sweet, sweet story! Very interesting and cool take on the prompt
Hopefully the wife became sweeter later. 🙂