(Author’s note: Everytime I post, I keep apologizing for not posting more. I really don’t have an excuse this month. I celebrated my 40th birthday, had some great things happen, and may have some more soon. I just haven’t been keeping active in writing. The Wednesday writing sessions are usually where I get my writing, then I don’t do much more for the week. I am hoping to change this, but it’s going to take some monumental work to do so.
Until then, here’s this week’s fictioneers:)

© Dale Rogerson
Lost In Your Eyes
by Miles H. Rost
Cherry thought she was going to fly off.
White-knuckling her boyfriend’s love handles, she tried moving with the curve of the speeding snowmachine.
Brandon just entered the snowmobile path that circled the playground, a roundabout for the machines, and roared up. He sped into each turn until reaching the beginning again, then did a quick donut, facing where he came from.
He looked behind him, staring deep into Cherry’s deep jade eyes.
Her eyes crinkled, an obvious smile on her face.
He revved up the snowmachine, and tore around the circle once more before rocketing down the snow lane.
Some authentic thrills in this story. I really did wonder if Cherry was going to fall off! A nice vignette of teenage romance.
Depends on how you visualize Cherry. If you thought of her as a short, semi-thick, but striking lady, she’d hold her own. If she was a willowy waif, it’s be a bit harder. It all depends on what she looks like in your mind. Thank you for stopping by! I will return the favor, I do promise.
Thought for half a sec that she was going to be flung off! So glad this is a happy story 🙂
We all were hoping she wouldn’t get flung off. That would have not been pretty. It’s a happy story, so it needed a happy “ending”.
Adrenalin rushes, fresh cold air, and a warm body to cling to, sounds like a winning combination 🙂
Agreed, especially in looking at it from a far off view. Thanks for stopping by!
You’re welcome.