Here’s another fictioneers entry. Make sure to read my other stories from the week!
An Unusual Request
“Good morning, Doctor Cavanaugh!” Harvey chimed, as he walked into the dentist’s office.
“Ah, Harvey! How’s the catching going out there?”
“I think we’re doing alright. Got 5 in one night. Most of them were flailing around.”
“Good. What can I help you with?”
“Well, I am needing some help with something. I need a crown removed. In fact, I need a few of them removed.”
“Oh really? Well, sit in the chair and we’ll take a look at you.”
“Uh…it’s not me. It’s this guy…”
Harvey pulled in a man with three gold teeth, on his hook.
The doctor grinned with sharp razor teeth, as he brushed his gray skin.
“Oh! THAT kind of work! Right away!”
Really original.
Very Sweeney Todd 😀 Nicely done.
Agree with all the above. Very ghoulish indeed!
Quite a different type of fishing, but I’m sure it pays off. I like this a lot.
a different school of fish! 🙂
Miles, A very creative story and scary.
I’d move out of that neighborhood. Foul deeds are being done. 😦 Well written. 🙂 —Susan
Not the kind of town one would want to spend to much time in 😉 Well written
So many scary dentists this week, like we don’t avoid them already. 😀
That’s a good one!
I wonder how they managed with his concrete boots… he had to quite heavy…
Now there’s a twist. Bravo.
I’ve still got a couple of gold crowns…I’d best refrain from smiling. I might get hooked… 😉
I can’t help thinking of your dentist as a queer sort of fish!
He’s a regular shark-type. XD
Aha! I’m a bit slow this week, in the head department.
Shark! Wow, good story! Creepy and good! Nan:)